Sabtu, 28 Februari 2009

Short hishing

I'm Still Nothing
By. Otaku



the sun beam passsed away
and the darkness night closed my way
but the moon guide me
through a pall on day

it's sunshiny airway
and the wind make me awe
my eyes can't stop see
but you are too shiny to me


the sky still blue
you go away and I don't have any clue
to find you

Living is for being
but without you, I'm nothing


the stars sparkling above
and the night be labor of love
changes the day aloft
but I still think of you in my alcove


the sky still blue
you go away and I don't have any clue
to find you

Living is for being
but without you, I'm nothing
I'm still nothing
still nothing






Gimana? Gimana?
Bagus g?
kayaknya g y?
(hiks....hiks....~_~)

Sekarang aku lagi cari orang yang sangup membuat bait2 di atas jadi lagu.
Tolong cariin ya?!

6 komentar:

  1. wouw....

    pa an ntu...

    hwe..he..he..


    artina pa????

    BalasHapus
  2. buat yang udah baca trus kasih komen,
    lagu ini aku persembahkan kepada Sora

    Hwe....sapa tu?

    BalasHapus
  3. hwehe..

    kyk pRnah dgR tuw puisi..

    yg km bkin pz duduk ma q yaw?

    hho...


    hLah!

    soRa Lge..

    jian..



    foto di fs yg q cm b2 ma dy..

    sm2 pkek bju putih..

    BalasHapus
  4. Wuh...
    lebay nie...
    tuw bukan cerita sedih low nis,

    tuw cerita bahagia tapi ironis....

    hwe..he..he..

    dalam waktu deket ini laguku bisa ddownload law...

    hwa..ha..ha..
    enjoy it..

    BalasHapus
  5. hwe..he..he..

    ntu lagu terbaruku...

    enjoy it...


    ngemeng-ngemeng...
    setelah lirikna ku baca-baca...
    setelah kupikir-pikir

    aku jadi tertarik ma lirikna..

    trus ku coba cari nada-nada yang sesuai..
    hummm....
    ternyata susahnya minta ampun...

    tapi aku dah dapet nada buat reffna...

    jangan marah law klo jelek..

    I just try..

    BalasHapus